the worst day ever

  

today was the worst day ever..Miss Zu are very angry with us..it is started when we tell her that we could do the presentation on last introductary paragraph today as some of our group member are not coming today..they involved in the sending of memorandum of peace at Putrajaya..Miss Zu said that she don't care what ever it is, we must present it today as she said that we should have a back up plan earlier..for example..each one of us should have a copy of the introductory paragraph..then the presentation is started..the level of Miss Zu anger increase as the first group work is not very well..worstly..she said that the essay written by  the first group was the bad essay that she ever read..then, she ask the group to get rid from there..then, she ask my group to present..my group essay is not good as well as the former group but it is much better..Miss Zu helped in correcting some  part of our essay..i feel glad that Miss Zu ask us to make a copy of our essay and distribute it to each group..she said that our grammar is bad but we do apply the correct technique of writing essay - ( 1) intoduction - hook, transitional sentence and thesis statement 2) body paragraph - topic sentence : topic and controlling idea, supporting detail and concluding sentence )..i do appreciate the cooperation given by group members especially Ujang, Amy, Izhan and Apis..

 

..the lesson continue..

the lesson for the topic sentence was continued today..and not forgotten, the introductary paragraph that we have done last week also continued tooday..yesterday, Miss Zu asked us to bring our laptop as we will write whole paragraph on the intoductary paragraph that we have done and apply what we have learn in it.. but, our group have to rewrite it as Miss Zu said it is not that good..so, today we have the new intoductary paragraph on the gender issue..while completing our essay, Miss Zu came and reprove on our grammar..ah..we all bad in grammar..but Miss Zu said that the new introductary paragraph that we write is much better..( "_ )

at the end of the class..some conflict occur..Miss Zu seem so disappointed with what has happened..

example of a good introductary paragraph

topic sentence on body paragraph

For the class today, i do learn about writing body paragraph..in body paragraph, there are topic sentence which contain a topic and controlling idea..to make it clear, here are some illustration on topic sentence

but, Miss Zu encourage us to put topic sentence in the first sentence as it is easier for us to elaborate it..

here are some example of topic sentence

and lastly, a good body paragraph should have :

High school..Oops..University Mucical..

Hi guys..its Monday..the speaking day..as usual..we have to play role in front..BUT..today was the different session ever as we have to play role like in the ' GLEE '..in short,,musical..Miss Zu give each one of group an extract from newspaper and we have to act on the topic mention..my group got the topic of a school bus crashed with six student harm..here are plot of our group story..

wasim do not chosen to follow the trip..he feel jealous and angry as he cannot follow the trip 

while the other of his friend can..so he plan to puncture the tyre of the bus..

( he sing that scene using Just The Way U Are melody )

then..the bus driver came and called the student..

"Kids, will have our trip today..so, get on the bus.."

the student get on the bus and the driver yell

"are u ready kids??"

kids answer "i i captain"

the driver again

"i can't hear u"

kids again "i i captain"

then the kids sang this song

"the wheel on the bus go round and round 3X

the wheel on the bus go round and round

all to the town

the door on the bus open and shut 3X

the door on the bus open and shut

all to the town"

suddenly, the bus lose control and the crash happen

"keep bleeding, keep keep bleeding in bus 2X"

then the people died

wasim feel regret and and sing a song on Perfect melody 

that is what we had for today..before that,,the video above shown one of the most outstanding group today.. ( X_X )

pronoun

pronoun was the lesson for today..presentation on introductory paragraph??

maybe next week i guest..The definition of pronouns is the word that takes place of a noun..

there are some type of pronoun that i've learn today..here are some noun and its example :

Personal Pronouns.

e.g. ; I, me, my, mine.

you, your, yours.

he, him, his, she, her, it, its.

we, us, our, ours.

Interrogative Pronouns.

e.g. ; who, whose, whom, which, what.

Demonstrative Pronouns.

e.g. ; this, that, these, those.

Indefinite Pronouns.

e.g. ; another, anybody, anyone, anything

Reflexive Pronouns.

e.g. ; himself, myself, yourself.

Reciprocal Pronouns.

e.g. ; each other, one another.

after that, as to enhance our understanding..we asked to go to the space behind 

the DSP and make circle..thank God that we have our class today

in DSP..in circle,,we have to make conversation with 

friend in front of us and switch friend when Miss zu

ask to do so..i took this chance to get

to know my friends closser..;-)

   

..introductory paragraph..

as we have our writing today..we do learn on how to write introductory paragraph..this lesson was the continuation of the last thesis statement class..i wonder there is various type of introductory paragraph..as been explained by Miss Zu also,,the introductory paragraph is the hook in attract reader to read the whole essay..as to see our understanding in writing introductory paragraph..we asked to write on it in group..my group have to write about gender using the contrary..then, we will present it tomorrow class..

Goodbye Friends ( T_T )

today, as we have our speaking, we were given task to be act in front..but before that, we were given handout on way to say goodbye of different country to be answer..and that what we have act in front..today we were not performing in our group but in pairs..and my partner today was Hisham..we agree to act on a cellmate saying goodbye before release..ooh..before i forget..the video above shown the best performer today..enjoy..

• Italy - Buona sera
• France - Au revoir
• Thailand - Sawadee
• China - Zai jian
• Malaysia - Selamat jalan
• Denmark - Farvel
• Kenya - Do widzenia
• Egypt - M'asselama
• Myanmar - Thwabaounme
• Poland - Do widzenia