..the lesson continue..

the lesson for the topic sentence was continued today..and not forgotten, the introductary paragraph that we have done last week also continued tooday..yesterday, Miss Zu asked us to bring our laptop as we will write whole paragraph on the intoductary paragraph that we have done and apply what we have learn in it.. but, our group have to rewrite it as Miss Zu said it is not that good..so, today we have the new intoductary paragraph on the gender issue..while completing our essay, Miss Zu came and reprove on our grammar..ah..we all bad in grammar..but Miss Zu said that the new introductary paragraph that we write is much better..( "_ )

at the end of the class..some conflict occur..Miss Zu seem so disappointed with what has happened..

example of a good introductary paragraph