today was the worst day ever..Miss Zu are very angry with us..it is started when we tell her that we could do the presentation on last introductary paragraph today as some of our group member are not coming today..they involved in the sending of memorandum of peace at Putrajaya..Miss Zu said that she don't care what ever it is, we must present it today as she said that we should have a back up plan earlier..for example..each one of us should have a copy of the introductory paragraph..then the presentation is started..the level of Miss Zu anger increase as the first group work is not very well..worstly..she said that the essay written by the first group was the bad essay that she ever read..then, she ask the group to get rid from there..then, she ask my group to present..my group essay is not good as well as the former group but it is much better..Miss Zu helped in correcting some part of our essay..i feel glad that Miss Zu ask us to make a copy of our essay and distribute it to each group..she said that our grammar is bad but we do apply the correct technique of writing essay - ( 1) intoduction - hook, transitional sentence and thesis statement 2) body paragraph - topic sentence : topic and controlling idea, supporting detail and concluding sentence )..i do appreciate the cooperation given by group members especially Ujang, Amy, Izhan and Apis..
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